It looks great but that brass casing detracts from the calls beauty. IMO
I think it would have looked better if the Ivory continued up further and you got rid of the brass. The call is so sleek and polished looking and that tarnished brass doesn't belong. Mind you these are my thoughts based on my likings.
Thanks Lou, I don't mind constuctive critizism at all... I think thats what makes us better call makers, and you did it tactfully.....

The lengths of each part of the call are there particular length for a reason, sound, but I could have tapered the end of the ivory at the transition. I may try that next time....I did come close to polishing the brass, but I wanted it to match my style of calls. Kenny